Correct or improve the translation of the following English sent

Correct or improve the translation of the following English sentences.原文：Business is viewed as an expression of the idea of equality of opportunity rather than the aristocratic idea of inherited privilege.译文：商业被视为机会均等思想的体现，而不是那种继承特权的贵族观念的体现。
【正确答案】：

人们认为商业所体现的是机会均等的思想，而不是那种继承特权的贵族观念。

【题目解析】：本题考查对被动语态的理解与翻译。此处被动语态的主语是business“商业”，谓语是is viewed“被视为”，应理解为“被人们视为”，将其翻译成主动语态“人们认为…”显得更自然，同时后面as的介词短语as an expression of…“…的体现”随着语态的转变相应地意译为“所体现的…”。