原文:当人们品味镌刻于汉字中博大精深的内涵与韵味时,一个“新北京”诞生了。译文:As people ponder on the

原文:当人们品味镌刻于汉字中博大精深的内涵与韵味时,一个“新北京”诞生了。
译文:As people ponder on the rich connotations and charms of these Chinese words, a "New Beijing"has thus been brought forward.
【正确答案】：改译：As people ponder on the rich connotation and charms of these Chinese characters,a New Beijinghas thus been brought forward.