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按要求写一封字数为130-150单词左右的信函。你叫王毅。你刚刚得知你的客户Mike Evans昨天升任公司财务总监,请写一封祝
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按要求写一封字数为130-150单词左右的信函。
你叫王毅。你刚刚得知你的客户Mike Evans昨天升任公司财务总监,请写一封祝贺信。
包括如下内容:
(1)表达得知消息的高兴心情并表示祝贺。
(2)对对方的成功表示赞赏。
(3)对两家公司未来的关系表示祝愿和期望。
(4)再次表示祝贺。
【正确答案】：October 31
Dear Mike,
I got the news of your promotion to the position of Chief Financial Officer yesterday.Please accept my congratulations on your promotion. It is indeed good news and I am really happy for you.
You have reached this position in your career through hard work and dealing with new challenges. You have achieved great success owing to your determination and vision. I have seen your journey in the last twenty years. I have silently observed your transition from a young management graduate to a Finance Executive. You are a great leader and good decision maker. Achieving such success is not a simple task. You really deserve it.
I sincerely hope that our companies will have closer and deeper cooperation under your leadership.
Congratulations again! Wish you a bright future.
Yours,
Wang Yi
评分标准:
5分——格式错误,条理不清,语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误,且多数为严重错误。
10分——格式基本正确,表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
15分——格式正确，基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中以希望严重错误。
20分——格式正确,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
24分——格式正确,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
注:白卷,与题目毫无关系,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想则给0分。如果字数未达到要求,酌情扣分。
你叫王毅。你刚刚得知你的客户Mike Evans昨天升任公司财务总监,请写一封祝贺信。
包括如下内容:
(1)表达得知消息的高兴心情并表示祝贺。
(2)对对方的成功表示赞赏。
(3)对两家公司未来的关系表示祝愿和期望。
(4)再次表示祝贺。
【正确答案】：October 31
Dear Mike,
I got the news of your promotion to the position of Chief Financial Officer yesterday.Please accept my congratulations on your promotion. It is indeed good news and I am really happy for you.
You have reached this position in your career through hard work and dealing with new challenges. You have achieved great success owing to your determination and vision. I have seen your journey in the last twenty years. I have silently observed your transition from a young management graduate to a Finance Executive. You are a great leader and good decision maker. Achieving such success is not a simple task. You really deserve it.
I sincerely hope that our companies will have closer and deeper cooperation under your leadership.
Congratulations again! Wish you a bright future.
Yours,
Wang Yi
评分标准:
5分——格式错误,条理不清,语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误,且多数为严重错误。
10分——格式基本正确,表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
15分——格式正确，基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中以希望严重错误。
20分——格式正确,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
24分——格式正确,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
注:白卷,与题目毫无关系,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想则给0分。如果字数未达到要求,酌情扣分。
